Is this the World we live in
9/22/2009 12:41:00 PM - Posted by Manish Pawar - 21 comments

!!  This is the world we live in
    Where joy and sorrow co-exist
    This is the world we live in
    Where brothers are becoming racist !!

!!  This is the world we live in
    Where love and hate control our lives
    This is the world we live in
    Where smile and tears shine on our faces !!

!!  This is the world we live in
    Where masks cover each face
    This is the world we live in
    Where lives run on full pace !!

!!  This is the world we live in
    Where money is dominating
    This is the world we live in
    Where happiness is just fading!!

!!  This is the world we live in
    Where harshness rules our heart
    This is the world we live in
    Where kindness moved away miles apart !!

!!  This is the world we live in
    Where masses are surviving in fear
    This is the world we live in
    Where we got back stabbed by our peer !!

!!  This is the world we live in
    Where there is disease everywhere
    This is the world we live in
    Where relief/ mercy exist nowhere !!

Last Words::
!!  If this is the whole world we live in, I don’t like this world !!
!!  For this world I need you, let’s move on and change this world !!
 
                                                                             -manish


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21 comments:

    DJ said...

    Very Nice Bro... Keep it up

  1. ... on September 22, 2009 at 1:07 PM  
    2. Unknown said...

    bro make it some color full also like add some MC BC kind of stuff ...!!

  2. ... on September 22, 2009 at 4:41 PM  
    3. Sumit said...

    nice one:).. welcome to the real world... welcome to the HELL..

  3. ... on September 22, 2009 at 5:57 PM  
    4. Unknown said...

    Yes, this is the world we live in...
    Mannie gr8 going man....
    U have put real life things in ur nice words...

  4. ... on September 22, 2009 at 6:06 PM  
    5. Unknown said...

    nice one manish..... keep going.... :)

  5. ... on September 22, 2009 at 7:19 PM  
    6. Manish Pawar said...

    thanks guyss...

    thanks for your support as always

    :D

  6. ... on September 22, 2009 at 7:26 PM  
    7. mvnworld said...

    Short n sweet..its a good start!! Hoping more cool stuff from ya!

  7. ... on September 22, 2009 at 8:48 PM  
    8. Life !!.. with nipun... said...

    nice... but thoda optimistic ho yaar.... itna sad kyun hai?

  8. ... on September 22, 2009 at 11:25 PM  
    9. Abhishek Desrada said...

    Hey this is really nice one...keep it up :):)

  9. ... on September 23, 2009 at 12:02 PM  
    10. Ashish said...

    Gud start brother...keep it up!!

  10. ... on September 23, 2009 at 12:04 PM  
    11. Anonymous said...

    Hi Manish,

    Poetry is nearer to vital truth than history. ~Plato, Ion

    Poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted. ~Percy Shelley, A Defence of Poetry, 1821

    Plato is correct but Shelley is GOOD.

    Wish you all the best.

    -SRInivas

  11. ... on September 23, 2009 at 12:43 PM  
    12. Manish Pawar said...

    Thanks a lot Srinivas :D

  12. ... on September 23, 2009 at 12:50 PM  
    13. Jayesh said...

    Really nice poem...and how true...so what are your plans of changing this world we live in?

  13. ... on September 23, 2009 at 1:11 PM  
    14. Anonymous said...

    sachi kahani, Manish ki Jubani.

    Good work Buddy....

  14. ... on September 23, 2009 at 2:00 PM  
    15. JD said...

    Thats a good one to start with, sachchai se bhara hua, is zaalim zamaane ki sachaai ko kuredta hua ek blog :)

  15. ... on September 23, 2009 at 5:05 PM  
    16. Anonymous said...

    Hi Brother,

    Nice facts plotted down on paper...(web :D)
    Good one....

    Amey

  16. ... on September 23, 2009 at 7:59 PM  
    17. Anonymous said...

    nice poem dukhi aatma.. but it ain't bad as u perceive it to be...
    newys cheers...

    Hrishikesh

  17. ... on September 24, 2009 at 12:15 PM  
    18. Amit said...

    gr8 composition dude!!
    u rock!!

  18. ... on September 25, 2009 at 2:54 PM  
    19. Rahul said...

    Great work dude... Come up with some more colorful compositions but also try to manage more rhyming... ;)

    Anyways very gud work....

  19. ... on September 27, 2009 at 3:42 PM  
    20. Anonymous said...

    Kya baat hain Manish Bhai..! SR solve karte karte Manish bhai ek acha "kavi" bhi hain aaj pata chala...Well Written.

    Will wait to read more fine tunes from you.

    Regards
    Sourav

  20. ... on October 5, 2009 at 10:24 PM  
    21. DesignXcellence said...

    Awesome lines bro

  21. ... on May 27, 2019 at 1:00 PM  
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